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Title: MEDLAND
Client: G. Pałka
Purpose: Practice&company design. Client want to a clean web 2.0 style.
Time Spent: a lot...
Description:
    Small changes in details, shadows etc.
    2 color version : )

    Changes: logo, search panel, menu :]


:+fav:, comments, opinions and suggests are much appreciated!

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:iconnonlin3:
Pisze po polsku, bo już po północy i mój mózg funkcjonuje w 50%. Design jest świetny, kolory w kosmos, detale lśnią.
Jedyna rzecz to za dużo tych tam małych obrazków ale olać to.
I tu z miejsca ostrzegam owsiana, że właśnie sam robię projekt i oglądam jego prace, więc żeby nie było :P
Technicznie praca jest bardzo dobra, wykonana starannie, kolory dobrane w kosmos perfekcyjnie, czysto, schludnie, drań mi będzie podbierał klientów (ale widać, że ma czym :P).
Więcej takich prac owsianko, to mnie motywuje do rozwoju, dzięki Tobie będę lepszy :*
Czekam na nastę;pną pracę wbijającą w fotel.
Do roboty!
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13 out of 16 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconthe-danzor:
The design is very nice and clean, very professional. however i think the design lacks alot of content and filled maby with to many images.

The font however is very clean and easy to read, its large which will help alot of users out with eye problems but also not to big that would make people scroll down alot for content and information.

The colors and how they are used has been done perfectly. However i do think the header has been made to large which will require users to scroll down when ever they enter a new page depending on screen size.

Overall i think its very nice, could use more content but i think its a design users will feel happy and confident to lookup the information and services provided.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
22 out of 26 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconalexld:
I think its pretty cool You should try removing the Free Stock photo watermark on her face though. I like the style and flow :)
:icontorsten85:
Looks good mate! Like the content with all the icons!

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:iconowsian:
this isn't free stock, this is iStock :] btw. when client buy all stocks, I can remove watermarks ; )

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:iconcoronalemon:
Really nice, well done.
Just one thing: I'm not sure about the hight of the red 1px (or 2px) line on the top. Try 3 or 4px ... but, it's just a suggestion.

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:iconmekot1337:
oł maj gad. dobre ;]
fav leci.

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Co, gdzie, jak?!
:icontom3k3:
git, blue better

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:iconglnoize:
Bardzo ładnie, fav jak nic leci ;) Jedyne co to nie podoba mi się jak wyciołeś u góry głowe tej laski, no ale tak to grejt.

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:iconbc-webmedia:
really nice style and good iconwork in content.

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